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Title: Lost in love. (an IC poem) Post by: Nicholi Ravnthorn on April 01, 2007, 06:36:03 am A simple warrior. Commands...simple. Arm up. Form. Charge. What of love? This is all new. So many feelings crashing in. What do I do? What do I say? War is easy. Strike. Block. People say war is chaos. Not I, war is order. Calm, collected. Steady. Love is chaos. Heart pounding, breath heavy. What do I do? What do I say? War, may seem complicated... No. Two forces, one victor. Life, love is. I see you, my love... I freeze. What do I do? What do I say? I've seen such beauty in this world. Tokuno, Waterfalls, Rolling Mountains... Perfect sunsets over the bay. The sun peeking over the Mountains. What are these beauties compared to you? My love, my sweet, my dream? Nothing. What do I do? What do I say? -Nicholi Peyton Ravnthorn Title: Re: Lost in love. (an IC poem) Post by: Marcus Kobra on April 01, 2007, 09:01:08 am (OOC: Thats Beautiful mate! good show with the writting, and ytoud get away with it sending it to yer real sweetheart too ;) )
Title: Re: Lost in love. (an IC poem) Post by: Jack Sinist (•̪●) on April 01, 2007, 09:35:42 am (OOC: I liked it. Nice work man!)
Title: Re: Lost in love. (an IC poem) Post by: qom_riyadh on April 01, 2007, 08:43:49 pm Very interesting! I like your use of contrary. Oh, and very romantic finale. Great job!
Title: Re: Lost in love. (an IC poem) Post by: Scarlet Grayner on April 01, 2007, 10:33:34 pm Nicely written it really.. well explains how Nich feels. I request more!
Title: Re: Lost in love. (an IC poem) Post by: Raiden Morana on April 02, 2007, 08:24:19 am Pretty damn good Nich'! :)
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