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Title: The search for a wife IC Post by: Conan Darkmoon on April 02, 2007, 07:45:08 pm I lost my wife
it nearly ended my life through heartache and strife I was able to strengthen my life Will it happen in time Will I be too late Battles pass by, others pass my eye oh how I dream I could have another One that in the morning would bake me biscuits with butter one I could introduce to me mother wish it could be the one in silver, less a chance of that then a goblin with a quiver. OOC: Im not a poetry guy at all, but I gave it ashot. Title: Re: The search for a wife IC Post by: qom_riyadh on April 02, 2007, 08:30:41 pm [OOC: Well overall I liked it, but the last line is... hmm... confusing. But thumbs up on efforts.]
Title: Re: The search for a wife IC Post by: Mela Arkay on April 03, 2007, 03:10:48 am [OOC]Nice poem! I can't write poetry without laughing at myself.. so nice work. And I got the last line=p[/OOC]
Title: Re: The search for a wife IC Post by: Vince Valentine on April 03, 2007, 11:42:11 am (OOC: Nice going man, I find it difficult to write poetry. mine usually end up sounding like a cheesy 80's song. :-[ Lets see some more! :OOC)
Title: Re: The search for a wife IC Post by: Marcus Kobra on April 04, 2007, 10:03:57 am (OOC: Bravo! a rhyming poem! prehaps I should try one someday.... )
Title: Re: The search for a wife IC Post by: Conan Darkmoon on April 05, 2007, 06:50:14 pm [OOC]Nice poem! I can't write poetry without laughing at myself.. so nice work. And I got the last line=p[/OOC] And you're the only one! ;D. |