*A letter sent to the steward*

[Keitaro Kazami]

Leso here is the plans I was talking about.

*signed*
Mizuho kazami
*Three scrolls of floor plans have been included with the "letter"*

[Hoagie]

*A folded letter is delivered.*

It's a bit... well, it's a good start. I'll address the plans floor by floor.

Ground Floor

Importing sandstone isn't really necessary for the staff area of the town tavern. Wood, or perhaps a less ugly cheaper, more easily obtainable stone would be more appropriate.

The office and kitchen seem larger than they need to be. Perhaps reduce the overall depth of the building for additional garden space outside.

First Floor

Needs windows.

Perhaps flip the stairs so they run from west to east rather than north to south.

Probably wood flooring, for a warmer, "friendlier" feel.

Roof Garden

The roof garden is a pleasant enough idea, but I think it would look better if the roof itself overhung a little. With the current proposed design, the roof appears to be perched on top of the walls, rather than actually... a roof.

I look forward to seeing the updated plans.

*Signed and stamped.*
Leso Varen,
Steward

[Hoagie]

*A second letter follows.*

I have been working with some of Cove's architects and have the following proposed changes to your design.

Main Area



Basement



Roof



*Signed and stamped.*
Leso Varen,
Steward